
The
first section of the instructional “cheat sheet” claims,
Even if you’re new to golf, you can still look and act like you
know what you’re doing. Making sure you have the right equipment in your bag
and making intelligent decisions about which club to use can get you off to a
great start. Offer to keep score and propose a couple of fun bets, and you can
really impress your fellow golfers, no matter how long they’ve been playing the
game.
The introduction is written in very simple, easy to read
language; clearly prompting an instructional atmosphere trough implementation
of plain style. This allows for readers to feel like the information they are
about to read will be easy to follow, and ultimately improve their game, even
if they are new to the sport. Essentially, by only reading the introduction of
the “cheat sheet” the reader will feel confident that they will learn
techniques that will advance their ability to play the game.
One
problem that I have with this “cheat sheet” is the fact that it claims new
golfers will learn how to look like they know what they are doing. Usually
newcomers to the game do not have the prettiest swing, which results in high
scores and slow play; and most experienced golfers do not enjoy slow play,
especially when one player in the group is hacking all over the course.
Learning how to play quickly and hit effective shots takes a lot of time and
practice; it cannot be learned from a “cheat sheet” or any other method besides
practice and repetition. I think that the façade of a simple game that it easy
to pick up creates false hope and misinforms readers, planting an inaccurate
image of the sport within their heads. Plain style could still be used to
describe the game quickly, but I believe that there should be some sort of
disclaimer stating that there is much more to being a good golfer than what is
on the “cheat sheet”.
Another
problem I have with the “cheat sheet” is the content. The sub-topics within the
guide include: knowing which club to use, “essential” items to carry in your
golf bag, different scoring names, how to assess penalties (briefly), and how
to make golf bets. There isn’t even any indication of the golf swing or how to
conduct oneself on the course, and yet the “cheat sheet” is claiming that it
will teach the reader to look like they know what they are doing, even impressing
their experienced friends.
Many golfers would agree that knowing
the proper terms and having the right items in your bag are no brainers, not
impressive feats. What would really impress an experienced golfer is a new
player with a proper swing that is consistent and fundamental. The guide should
have included some quick tips to keep in mind so that people trying to learn
how to improve their swing would have something to base their game off of.
Making a
complex sport seem easy is no simple task. But using the proper presentation of
information can make all the difference. Effective use of the plain style takes
the pressure of learning a seemingly impossible game, and makes it far less
intimidating. Even though the “cheat sheet” has some flaws, it still does a
good job of being inviting to new players, and making them feel welcome. I
believe that with a brief inclusion of how a fundamental swing should be
conducted, the novice golfer might actually be able to benefit by reading this
“cheat sheet”.
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