Thursday, May 7, 2020

Inside Zadie Smith's Writing


“Creative Style” Critique:  Zadie Smith



            Creative style is far different than its companions, official and plain, solely, in my opinion, because of its freedom, its infinite vision, particularly when paired with the fictional novel.  There really are no significant or harsh boundaries required of the creative style, similarly with fiction literature, and it is free to incorporate all styles into one; an exquisite example of this use would be in the writing of White Teeth by Zadie Smith.  Her story mainly follows two families, the Joneses and the Iqbals, as they navigate the contemporary world of living as a human being.  There are a handful of perspectives that are presented throughout the novel, but they all connect in the very end, both literally and figuratively.  This freedom allows Smith to share her message or story in a way that she finds most effective.  She intelligently chooses which styles to use, where, and how.  This is what leads Smith to spread her message; she can speak to anyone who picks up the novel and reads, simply through her book.  Smith takes on the challenge of using creative style, so she can teach and delight, the foundation of literature studies.
            For our view, we will begin with readability statistics to get a formal, albeit superficial, basis for Smith’s writing.  There were two specific excerpts from separate sections of the book that were analyzed, and they can give us a workable range of readability to get a sense of the novel overall and where Smith’s writing can stretch.  The Simple Measure of Gobbledygook, also known as SMOG, offers approximate required years of education in order to comprehend the reading; White Teeth’s excerpts scored 11.02 to 16.78.  As for the Flesch Reading Ease, it scores between 0 and 100—the higher values indicate an easier read while the lower values imply higher difficulty.  Smith’s Ease score fell between 35.13 and 60.12.  These arbitrary numbers actually give us some insight into how readers will take to the novel.  For instance, the SMOG results show that Smith’s work could be taken well with High School to College-educated individuals, and the Ease score shows a standard to difficult comprehension. 
            A deeper dive into Smith’s language shows her use of all three styles in various ways.  For example, she has a fantastic way of distinguishing characters and their development.  Some characters, like the Chalfen family, are known as intellectuals and can be picked out easily by their dialogue.  They use a lot of official style strategies like longer, more complex sentences with a large, sophisticated vocabulary, like specific botanical terms or science strategies.  In addition, when Smith starts detailing a memory, or flashback, or even a background description, she tends to write in a more official to plain style, sort of like a news or blog article.  However, when Smith starts exploring more creatively, readers start to become more engaged.  The creativeness is what is real to readers and what truly speaks to them.  There is a plethora of figurative and creative language such as diazeugma, expletives to catch attention and for emphasis, epithets, appositives, similes, and so on.  This kind of language is what sets creativity apart.  Official and plain styles follow guidelines and seem to retain less emotion or humanity; they are monotone.  Creativity lets humans express themselves in a way they see fit.  It is colorful, it is raw, it is honest.
            There is a true beauty to creative style; it can attract so many people, readers, and writers alike, and offers just as many insights and evaluations.  Official and plain styles may get to the point faster, if you will, and are professional or universal to a point where it may be masking a writer’s unique voice and visions.  With creative styles, there is the potential to be limitless in understanding and influence.  It becomes a more intimate experience between audience, text, and author, and it never stops growing—the creativity, the discourse, the ability to reach more and more people each in their own way.

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