The world of media is a lot more complex than some may
realize, navigating billion-dollar acquisitions, company mergers, and network
ownership. Knowing who controls the media you consume is important for a wide
audience because of the impact ownership can have on content biases, particularly
in the news realm.
Journalists must relay this kind of information not only to
the general public, but also to other media outlets not involved, stock market
enthusiasts, and business moguls. They do this through plain style.
Interestingly, this NPR article about the Disney/Fox merger
popped up in their business section, not entertainment, iterating the
importance of the financial effects of this deal over the effect on content now
that Disney owns iconic, and sometimes raunchy, characters like Homer Simpson
and Deadpool. This emphasis on financials is the reason it is more integral to
the business world but is also the reason it is written in plain style.
The article utilizes many plain style strategies in order to
make this topic accessible to a wider audience, however its readability
statistics would tell you otherwise. Where the typical reading level for a
standard audience to understand is seventh grade, this article clocks in at almost
13th grade! This could be due to the quotes that are included, increasing the
sentence length, as well as the frequent mention of money and numbers from the
financial aspect of it.
Coleman Liau index:12.11
Flesch Kincaid Grade level:12.98
ARI (Automated Readability Index):12.96
SMOG:14.77
Flesch Kincaid Grade level:12.98
ARI (Automated Readability Index):12.96
SMOG:14.77
The most glaring plain style strategy is the use of short and
concise paragraphs, each containing one topic. Quotes are used to further
explain topics while giving the audience the chance to contextualize what they
are reading in the sense of who is being affected by this deal. Creative
language is thrown in as occasional descriptors. This is probably to ease the
financial heavy language of numbers and networks in order to keep readers more
interested in the impact of their media engaged. The author dubs Disney an “entertainment
behemoth,” references Disney “flirting with the idea,” and even begins the
entire article by referencing two major characters from each empire. The
initial sentence that introduces the merger to its audience is perfect:
“Homer
Simpson probably won't become the newest member of the Avengers, but anything's
possible now that Disney owns 21st Century Fox.”
The image of Homer Simpson on a life-threatening mission
with the Avengers is ridiculous, but this descriptive, straight-forward
sentence puts the Disney/Fox merger into context for those not as well versed
in media acquisition but also exemplifies the impact it will have on content
going forward in this new landscape.
Using plain style is further supported in this article when tweets
are used to provide credibility instead of convoluted sentences. Tweets from Simpsons
writer AI Jean and Ryan Reynolds, aka Deadpool show support and excitement in
the simplest way. The additional use of tweets helps break up the places of
jargon without taking away the importance of the subject matter or dumbing it down
too much.
Plain style in this piece of writing is essential because of
the audience it is targeted toward. What makes it credible isn’t the ability to
explain the topic in a convoluted way like official style, but the way in which
the author can write in a way that is understandable to the masses, despite the
higher-grade level.
Noelle H.
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