By K.C. Cayo (they/them)
The New York Times, generally, has made a good
practice of accessibility in their reading levels—their texts require a lower
reading level, which means they have a higher reading ease. The typical New
York Times article has about a tenth grade reading level and a Flesch Reading
Ease of 60 to 70, so you do not need to be the most knowledgeable or the most
qualified to understand any of their texts. One article, however, encompasses
the best parts of Plain Style, though the overall tone used in the piece makes
it fall short in other categories.
In mid-March, 2022, Luke Broadwater and Amelia
Nierenberg wrote an
article about the U.S. Senate meeting, groggy and obviously irritated, the morning
after Daylight Savings time ended, and unanimously voted to make Daylight
Savings permanent after very little discussion. The composition was humorous
and light-hearted as it emphasized the exhaustion of senators after losing an
hour of sleep, the surprising energy and unification they experienced across
party lines at the possibility of getting rid of this “frustrating
clock-changing", and the few comments that were covered in the
bare-bones conversation. Senator Marco Rubio, a Republican from Florida,
introduced the Sunshine
Protection Act with almost no warning or debate.
Plain style is a writing approach that
emphasizes the readers’ needs. It is concise and reader-friendly, often written
for a wider audience. Daylight Savings, an issue that affects almost every
person, is a good topic to address in plain style. This ensures that almost any
reader could engage with the article and understand what the conversation is,
what the bill addresses, and what final steps moving forward could look like.
The authors ensured that this text would be accessible for a wide audience
(ironic, seeing as The New York Times is [inaccessibly] hidden being a paywall)
so they could inform the public about policies that the Senate is enacting. The
style fits well with what a news article should look like, though perhaps it is
at an even higher reading ease level than others of its kind. Though it uses
some words that may require the occasional reader to break out their thesaurus,
for the most part the sentences are simple, short, and intentional. The
majority of the sentences are in active voice, emphasizing the action and the
agent of said action, which in this scenario was likely done to not only
humanize the Senators, but to create a humorous tone. The authors know
that this topic, along with the speed in which it was brought to the Senate
floor and passed, is funny, and that many readers will read about it with
amused surprise. It is rare that politicians are willing to “cross the aisle”
and agree with their counterparts of other parties, yet they came together so
determinedly because they were cranky about losing an hour of sleep. In these
ways, the plain style worked well for this type of writing.
On the other hand, plain style could also cause
some problems when it is used in this way. This article reads like a comedy. It
is laughable, it is enjoyable, and we, as readers, resonate will the bone-deep
weariness and subsequent joy at the possibility of making Daylight Savings
permanent. However, what this article gains in accessibility, it loses in
credibility; the combination of the topic and the writing style do it a
disservice in this situation. It hardly reads like a New York Times article.
One way that this piece could have added credibility was by highlighting the
historical precedent of Daylight Savings, the discourse that surrounds changing
it in the first place, or even what the next steps look like in this
conversation. Scientists and politicians have been advocating for a single time
system for some time, though they do not agree about which version is the best
one. There is also an extensive history to why Daylight Savings exists in the
first place, from the passion project of Benjamin Franklin in the 1800s to the
number of trains that would arrive late to the station due to the different
“sun times” that different states followed in the 1840s. However, none of this
history is addressed in any meaningful way in the article. Though this writing
evokes excitement and amusement, it misses the mark in integrity.
There are pros and cons to every style of
writing, and plain style is not unique in that sense. The New York Times, for
all that it tends to aim toward official styles, or a mix of official and
plain, leaned into the latter in this situation. This was an easy,
comprehensible read geared toward a larger audience, which made sense for this
piece considering how widely Daylight Savings affects a diverse range of
people. However, for a political article, it was surprisingly comedic, whether
that was intentional or not, and that hurt the ethos of the writing. Overall,
this piece accomplished what it needed to: it informed the public of what the
Senate is talking about in a simple, approachable way. Regardless of how they
meant to accomplish that, they were successful.
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