By Caitlin Olson
Standardized testing is to suppose to be an
accurate representation of how well a student will perform in various subjects
throughout school. The article that I chose to write about is “The Advantages
and Disadvantages of Achievement Tests” by Ralph Heibutzki. Throughout this
article he discusses the main issues of standardized testing such as race,
income, pressure to perform, and not all skills are measured equally. He also
gave same some examples of how standardized testing could be beneficial such as
it is efficient to administrator, student improvement, and accurate performance
indicator.
The plain style is very evident by using short,
less complex sentences. They state the facts clearly and concisely without all
the extra, unnecessary jargon. This article does not have a targeted audience and
it does not seem to be bias towards one opinion. This allows the audience to
read the information and form their own opinion on the topic. I believe
the writer wanted their readers to
know both sides of standardized testing and how it can be a positive thing when
determining effective performance and a negative thing when it comes to the
pressure they bring to students.
As far as accessibility, this article is
accessible to any reader as well as it is easy to read. Each section of the
article is bolded as well as it uses clear, plain language. The writer also
wrote their argument in a logical order by putting the important details first.
In the beginning they talked about some of the positive aspects of standardized
testing such as being a performance indicator, effective venue for change, and
efficient to administer. They indicated that if used appropriately, standardized
testing can provide a clear-cut picture of how well a student is performing.
This is a good thing for parents because they appreciate having this
information so they can pinpoint what their child is doing wrong and how they
help them succeed. Teachers also benefit by seeing these results because it
allows them to see what they need to approve on as a teacher. When it comes to
being effective venue for change, the educational policymakers often use these
tests to decide how they want to allocate their resources. According to Popham
“Such funds are best used in districts whose scores suggest serious action is
requires”. If a school’s test scores look like they need to be improved, most
of the funding will go to that school. Lastly, they discussed how standardized
testing is more efficient to administer. This is because all of the testing is
done over the computer, and it reduces the time that it takes to grade tests.
They continued this pattern by then discussing
the negative effects of standardized testing. By doing this it allows the
reader to easily follow along with the main arguments of the paper. Some of the
negative effects that they talked about are not all skills are measured
equally, fairness, and the negative pressures on schools. In this section they
argued that no test will ever be able, no matter how unbiased it seems, can
equally measure what each student learns. Standardized testing is typically in
a multiple-choice format which only measures knowledge and skills and not
creativity and problem solving. When it comes to fairness there is a gap in
achievement results between rich and poor students because students that are
rich have more opportunities to succeed than students who are in low-income
houses. Lastly, there is a lot of negative pressures on the schools to succeed
because funding and salary improvements are typically associated with the test
score results. Also, students that do not do well on the test may be written
off and placed in classes that do not challenge them. This may leave the
student as well as the teacher to feel unmotivated.
As far as credibility, this article seems to be
very organized and well thought out by how they laid out their argument to
their readers. They also cited their research throughout the article which
makes the reader feel as though the writer took the time to thoroughly
investigate this topic. They were able to make this article easy to read while
also seeming credible to their readers. This article is very easy to
skim from outside readers because of the bolded title as well as shorter
paragraphs. It was set in an appropriate tone where it seemed like
they were very professional and they also
seemed very passionate about the topic. As I said before, this article does a
really good job of blending styles because it seems credible as well as it is
easy to read for outside audiences.
There was also minimal redundancy throughout
this article. The main idea was definitely stated but it was repeated over and
over again. They clearly had separate sections for each main point and then
continued to elaborate on those main points. The use of active voice was also
clear throughout this article. The tone made it seem like they were talking
straight to their readers which gave it a personal touch. Using this tone, it
allows the readers to connect with the writer and form their own opinion.
In conclusion, “The Advantages and
Disadvantages of Achievement Tests” conveyed a lot of plain language while also
seeming credible to its readers. This article a lot of shorter, less complex
sentences and minimal jargon. The article wrote in active voice which helps the
readers connect more with the writer. Using these strategies of plain style
will help the readers fully understand the topic and then they can form their
own opinions on the matter.
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