By Tori Horman
Two
of the most prominent plain style strategies in this book are the avoidance of
jargon, abstraction, and euphemism and lower level of formality. The author
defines any terms that the reader may be unfamiliar with, often using analogies
and examples of things that readers are familiar with. Taking a concept that
the reader may be familiar with and using that to illustrate how something
works allows them to better visualize what is going on. Page 205 reads, “When
you improvise, you don’t allow yourself total freedom. You choose your notes
carefully, according to the rules appropriate to whatever genre of music you
are playing- and there are always rules. Rule-free improvisation would be like
rule-free conversation: a frustrating, unrewarding mess. This comparison with
conversation is quite useful because conversations are improvised.” Like
musical improvisation, a conversation is not scripted, but there are rules to
follow based on context. By making this comparison, readers who do not have a
background in genres of music that use improvisation can better understand how
it has rules. This quote also uses “you” to refer directly to the reader, thus
lowering the level of formality. Another way the author does this is by adding
humor and personal comments throughout the book to keep the reader entertained.
In
addition to explaining musical concepts the reader may not be familiar with,
the book also breaks down scientific concepts regarding sound and how our
brains process it. For example Page 122 of Chapter 9 says, “Your eardrums are
like tiny, highly sensitive trampolines that react quickly to changes in air
pressure.” Comparing an eardrum to a trampoline allows the reader to visualize
something they are familiar with. The book goes on to explain how your eardrum
reacts to musical notes in particular saying, “When you hear a musical note,
however, there is a repeating pattern to the pushes and pulls on your eardrum.
If you hit a piano key, twang a guitar string, or blow into a saxophone, you
set up a trembling vibration in the instrument and the air around it…. The
regular to-and-fro vibration of the instrument produces a pattern of repeating
ripples of pressure in the air that push and pull on your eardrum.” In this
explanation, the author uses active voice and simple sentences to explain the
process of sound traveling to the eardrum. Active voice is particularly important
when explaining processes like this because it’s important for the reader to
know what is doing what (the vibration produces a pattern, the ripples of
pressure push and pull on your eardrum, etc).
Some people may
argue that plain style limits the reader from getting the full picture. They claim
that advanced scientific concepts cannot be broken down very well into simpler
language without losing some much-needed information. However, texts in plain
style are a great starting point for conveying information to someone with no
prior knowledge of a topic. Someone who is completely unfamiliar with the
complex workings behind a topic is not going to find an article full of jargon
and official style helpful. If the reader wants to dive deeper, they can seek
out more advanced texts once they are more familiar with the basics. This book cites
several studies throughout the text, so that readers can seek out information
presented in its original more complex context once they are familiar with the
basics. For example, chapter 8 centers around explaining a variety of studies
done by researchers on musical talent. These studies are summarized and cited
in the bibliography at the back of the book which has all of the sources cited
by chapter so the reader can easily seek out the sources they are most
interested in for further reading.
Overall,
plain style is important when first introducing readers to more complex topics.
Although I am someone with a background in music, I don’t know all of the
science behind it, or how creates certain psychological reactions in people. I
learned a lot from this book that I feel will benefit me as a musician, as well
as allow me as a listener to think about music in a new way. If this
information was presented in a more complex way, I would have struggled to
grasp it a lot more and admittedly not even bothered to learn about it in the
first place.
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